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Old 12-19-2009, 03:33 PM
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Re: Atropos Belladonna

Okay, much better though it's still wall-of-text-y. x.x

But there's not much else I can really say if you don't want her re-approved, except ask if you can add a brief summary/synopsis of the entire profile in the end using the template sections for quick reference, just in list form even, with everything else you have written acting as further information on each section.
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