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Originally posted by Puck ASSIGNMENT TIME!
Simple enough this time, you are to have Faite arrive at the front door to find a Student of the Dome waiting for him. Describe this character however you would like but make it original, please. Then have the character show Faite to his teachers room(Kaze) end the post with Faite and your NPC about to enter Kaze's room. Here are your stipulations: it must be between 800-1000 words and it must have no more than five comma's excluding ones used in dialog as they are obligatory.[
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I'M just going to try something a bit different here... note that I copy pasted some information about your two teachers so far... note that underlined in italics is the same way you would use Italics if you didn't like something, or someone.
Bic:
As Faite opened the dome doors he could immediately tell it was nowhere near what he had imagined. The doors were only about Five feet tall, however the inside of it was larger than even the largest castle Faite had been in (and that was quite allot) .
"Ummm... Hello? Is anyone here?"
Only if you ask nicely. stated another voice, friendlier than Anoens. Faite looked around, and saw one of the strangest creatures he had ever seen. From the waist on up it looked like one of the most beautiful women Faite had seen. From the waist down It turned into a horse.
" A... centaur," Faite said in awe.
Aye... I will be sending you to the instructor of your choice. You have two options based on the way you got here, and the skills you used. Your choices are...
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"Ummm.... I choose Tsuukai Ita." Faite said, thinking that would help him better than some lazy-genius-jerk that used more magic than his own axe.
Too bad! His class is full. Looks like Kaze is your choice! The centaur looked as though it were trying hard not to laugh.
"I never really
did have a choice, did I?" Faite asked.
Nope.
"Then why'd you ask me which teacher I wanted?" Faite asked, clearly befuddled by this.
As a test, my job is to see which teacher the student wants, and then I place him in their corresponding teachers room. You chose Ita, so you get Kaze. If you wanted Kaze, you should have picked Ita..
"Can I try the test again?" Faite asked.
Of Course! After all... the main reason your at the dome is so you can learn from mistakes. But rules are rules, I must repeat what I said earlier.
I will be sending you to the instructor of your choice. You have two options based on the way you got here, and the skills you used. Your choices are...
Tsuukai Ita, Tsuukai Ita is a Blood Knight-He lives to battle, and battle alone-. He is harsh and unforgiving and will only train students as a way to amuse himself between epic adventures to heaven or random sword fights in the middle of Volcanoes. Don't get on his nerves or you probably won't wake up with your head.
Kaze, The Grand Archmage of Wind, he did not get that title by chance. He is a genius but also can be a lazy jerk. He dislikes fighting and has an annoying sense of humor.
"I chose Kaze!" Faite said, almost before the centaur had finished speaking.
Very well... Follow me to Kaze's room.
"But I thought you said that I could take the test over again!" Faite complained.
First rule of the dome... there are NO do- overs.
"Then Why'd you say I could take the test over again?" Faite asked.
Because you can... it just doesn't matter who you chose the second time, because we already have the real results from the first test. You can take the test again, But it will still have the same effects as the second one.
"So... why can't I have Ita as my teacher?"
You really are dense aren't you, Faite? I've told you this quite a few times now. You can't have Ita as your teacher because you CHOSE him. I put you in the teachers class that you didn't choose. The dome makes you think you'll like one teacher because he fits your style better, that... and Ita's class is full. As to where Kaze rarely gets any students. I'm actually surprised that the dome chose you to go to Kaze, as I thought you would go to Ita's class myself.
"Stupid dome magic." Faite mumbled under his breath.
Once your aware of one of the dome's magics, it can't be used on you ever again. The centaur said to the dragon-mail clad dwarf.
"Really?" asked Faite, thinking that this would help him better against Magic users that he faced.
No... I thought I'd give you something to think about for a while. The centaur finally broke out into a laugh. It sounded like jingling bells tinkling on crystals.
Well.... look at that! We're here! This is where I take my leave, your teacher is just behind this door.
Faite closed his eyes and opened the door.