You like Starbursts, eh?

I read all of your poems but I'll just comment on the latest one. I like how you used "starbursts" instead of "stars" in Inevitable. It gives it a deeper meaning. The imagery is beautiful and provides a good backdrop for the message you were sending. I also like the structure of the poem. It begins with a basic rhythm and rhyme, and gets a little distorted in the middle, and then recapitulates. It's a short piece, but there's a lot going on. I like that.