
07-11-2009, 07:57 PM
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Re: "Fangs Beneath the Sand" - heroic fantasy short story
Hey Jeff, I love this story! I'm glad you're letting the world read it even though it's not published. I like the Ancient Egypt setting, and you brought it to life. And there's something about the word asp that conjures up a clear image...well, I like that word. Asssssp.
If you have another story of Yafeu to post, that'd be awesome.
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