I'm actually pleasantly surprised by this story-line. In my view, some elements might need a little tweaking (but we are reading the condensed version, after all), such as some of the events sounding a lot like Wind Waker (the whole tower thing, and going underwater to find the ancient kingdom). It sounds a little like a Wind Waker/Twilight Princess hybrid, actually, what with Link's trying to stop an unstoppable monster and ending up in prison, and having to break out. Either way I think it sounds better than Twilight Princess's confused story-line already, so I say power to you! Excited to hear the rest.