Well...You used tons of cliches and ideas from previous Zeldas, like a princess trapped in Jabu Jabu, which was already done in
OoT, and you left a lot of plot holes(for example, How was the MS broken?) . Plus you totally overused the bowling sidequest, which would become boring and repetitive after a while. Overall, I dont think it would be a game I'd play.
Sorry, but its not brilliant, although I can see you put lots of work into it.