You didn't edit his strengths or weaknesses. They need more work done on them. They're much to vague and I'm sure you can add more to each section if you really think about it. Oh and next time you can just post in here when you've finished editing. You don't need to PM me each time. It's only a problem when you double post needlessly.

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[The Figments of My Imagination]
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