Thread: Aiko Yoshida
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Old 06-25-2009, 02:02 PM
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Re: Aiko Yoshida

You might want to put a space between your paragrahps like this:

... blah, blah, blah, blah. (End Paragraph)

Blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah. (New Paragraph)

Aide from that, eveything's good... with one exception.

What powers do each demons possess? Please, be as specific as possible. As well, what are their weaknesses and strenghts? Think of each demon, or familiar as having their own mini profile. Although, you can leave out some trivial facts like a Bio, or in-depth personality.

Edit: If you need an example, click the link in my signature and look for 'Vaskalen: The Hellfire Sword' At the bottom, you'll see what I mean, except I decided to add a small bio and other stuff like that. You don't need to go to that deail, but detail doesn't hurt, savvy?
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Last Edited by Ciroton; 06-25-2009 at 02:03 PM. Reason: Reply With Quote
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