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Originally Posted by Ciroton
Alrighty then, before we begin, I have to tell you now that several people call one of our resident moderators 'Aiko', so it may get just a tad confusing. No, you don't need to change your character's name. =P
Speaking of your character, you might want to add some more detail to the Strengths, Personality, and maybe a little bit more to the appearance. Also, he height is confusing. Do you mean 157 cm, or 1.57 cm? If the latter, that is ridiculously small since may characters here could defeat her by simply stepping in the wrong place. xD
Moreover, try to clean up your profile by seperating sections with a space, and creating paragraphs ever three (3) to five (5) sentances. It makes it much more bearable for someone to read, as opposed to a wall of text.
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the problem is, she doesn't have any strength, but the loyalty of the legion.
k, I tried a little harder this time on describing her personality :3
I really don't know what else I can describe about her appearance D: probably her face shape and the size of her hands/feet, but I think this is useless information since anyone can imagine her hands size by her height :3
and height thing, sorry, around here we use 1,57 cm to say 1 meter 57 cm, but I changed it on the profile
