Calm down. You've only waited two days. I know some people here who stayed patient for a month before double posting. Plus, you already PMed me about this. It was completely unnecessary. Now to business ...

M'kay, I want you to study some other character profiles. A little homework here before we continue. I want you to study five characters. You can look at mine which you can find in here and Drammor's characters: Tierra Nena, Kylie Wild, Aevukepe, Omentus Anima, and Tarnogh. I'd prefer if you studied a little of both our characters. Variety is the spice of life and you can learn different things by looking at each our characters. Once you have studied five of our characters come and tell me how you could improve your character. By asking you to study these I am by no means asking you to copy us or be as detailed. Each person has their own style of profiling. These are just examples to learn from because it seems you could benefit by seeing what has been done to get you started.