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The Stupid Sages (a play written by Darkus Triforce)
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06-20-2009, 02:23 PM
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Re: The Stupid Sages (a play written by Darkus Triforce)
lol heh, that was ok I guess. I agree with silver. You should watch out more for your grammar. Having the sages fight over who is more important sounds like a good idea, but you should've taken more time on this. It feels a little rushed and you could've worked a little more on the humor...
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