Better, but:
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Weapon: Dragon staff : Stolen off a slain dragon warrior : It grants the power of easily slaying dragons of all sorts, and a great immunement of fire, but a great weakness to water.
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How so? That's too vague.
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Weakness: Water, Fear, His own magic : acrobactism : often pushes the line and breaks a leg or too.
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Explain. Too vague again.
You may also want to consider a limit to how much magic he can use at one time. Does it consume some type of energy or mana?