Hmm, a little better, but ...
Quote:
Strengths: Being hit from the front, Taking several melee hits,water.
Weakness: fire,being hit from the back, easily knocked down
Skills/Magic: Fit as a acrobatic,walking on water,Water shield.
|
You're much too vague. Try looking at the strengths, weaknesses, skills/magic of two of mine or Drammor's characters again. Think about what you need to include in the descriptions of these. Being too vague allows for you and anyone else you battle with to get confused. There's no clear picture of how his magic works or what exactly his strengths and weaknesses are.