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This is pretty self-explanatory. He can take earth, fire, water, and air and control it into different shapes and forms. The more powerful the attack, the more of his own energy he uses.
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I think you need to give more examples of what kind of attack for each element would be considered a "powerful attack". Give us some examples of his limits here.
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He has black hair that is longer or shorter due to the seasons. In the summer it only comes to mid-forehead. In the winter it can come past his eyes.
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This in the appearance section is redundant since you already mentioned this for his hair section. I suggest you leave just the colors of his eyes and hair for the eyes and hair section, and move these:
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Depending on the season his hair will be different lengths. In the summer his hair comes to mid-forehead. During the winter his hair will be past his eyes when stretched.
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Depending on his mood, his eyes change shades. If he is content his eyes are a dark blue. If he is wary or nervous then his eyes get really light. When he is angry, his eyes get flecks of red in them. The angrier he gets, the more red his eyes have.
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to the appearance section.
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When he uses magic and he isn't attacking or being attacked he can use the energy from his surroundings instead of himself. He can even use the energy of his opponent!
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Just checking, but this means he can only use the energy of his opponent if he is not engaged in combat, yes?