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I think you two have a wonderful parody in the making. I expect to see many lulz from you two.
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Thanks a lot
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I did notice a few grammar and punctuation issues in this chapter, TRICKSTER
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yeah... when writing parodies I dont really stop to check on my grammar so that I can type just as ideas and jokes come into my mind so yeah, you might see a lot of grammar mistakes in the stuff I write
I'll be sure to watch out for that, and Prince Deity will too (though he's usually the one correcting ME ).
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Instead of just saying "Links' House" in a transition scene, you should make some really zany transition scene. It adds to the humor and makes a bland transition...well, less bland.
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Yeah I guess we'll do that in the following chapters.
And you will have more lulz! Chapters one and two are pretty much meant to catch your attention and get you to read the parody. The real randomness and lulz start from chapter 3.