I think you two have a wonderful parody in the making. I expect to see many lulz from you two.

Some points of criticism, though- since this is a parody, I can handle the fact that you've used script formatting; however, I did notice a few grammar and punctuation issues in this chapter, TRICKSTER. Sometimes after a line, you don't alway seem to capitalize a sentence consistently, such as after an action. Also, rather than using multipule exclaimation marks, just use one and bold either a specific word or sentence. It achieves the same effect of what you're trying to do, but looks nicer as well. Sometimes I see you leave off periods.

Instead of just saying "Links' House" in a transition scene, you should make some really zany transition scene. It adds to the humor and makes a bland transition...well, less bland.

Next time, try proofreading this. Since you're co-writing this with PD, maybe get him to glance over it a second time for you as well? That was you can help each other weed out whatever errors crop up.

That's all I have for now. I demand more lulz! :3