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The Treaty of Versailles, having charged Germany $33 Billion for damages done to the world ,even damages it didn’t do included, left Germany’s economy in ruins. This $33 Billion lost caused Germany to go under another “Great Depression” per se. People were unemployed leading to fear for themselves and anger at America. Hitler promised that as leader he would rebuild the economy and make more jobs for unemployed.
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You shouldn't put brackets in an essay unless its citing a quote, so that's what i suggest changing it too, but it's up to you. Other than that, it sounds pretty good. Is there a specific length it has to be? something like 2 pages or 500 words?