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Try starting the first sentence with "During a time of great need .... bla blah blah." What was the Treaty of Versailles and why did the Germans have to pay money? To who? What is Hitler Youth? Don't jump into things, explain them to the reader. You have to assume your educating them, you can't expect them to know what your talking about already.
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It sounds like the germans having to pay money and hitler youth are the main points of his essay, so you would introduce them in your intro paragraph, and use the following two paragraphs (or more) to explain them and the relevance to the topic.
What you have so far is good, but you need to lengthen it a bit. Don't go into much detail in your opening paragraph.