+20 points Well, I disagree. I thought the text boxes were really really good. I loved the shell going back and creaming them all! That was waay funny. And I loved the little black mage leader guy. And mount goolock! I really like the hills and happy dream backgrounds! And the cure for cancer part was funny. "I'm Speechless."

-1 point- I thought the 8-bit bronze looked kinda bad (just look at panel 28) I think you should have left him but that's just a smidgion in a great comic!!!