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Old 10-21-2008, 09:44 PM
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Re: PHSYCO COMIC OF THE PLOT!

I loved it. "I can't believe it's not butter" was the funniest moment for sure.

Here's a few tips:

-Make sure there's a border around the comic. As in, some of the panels cut right into the side of the image, and you want to make sure there's some black space there to cushion things.
-Your panel alignment is a little crazy, but I didn't read anything out of order, so I suppose it works.
-Change your font! Impact is good for some special effects, but switch to a good comic font for the bulk of the text.

That's all I have for now, but I mostly really liked it. There's was mostly action this time, and not much plot, so I can't wait for the next one.
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