It's about freaking time.

EDIT: I was just tagging this so I could come back after I read the new version. On the subject of Japanese suffixes, don't you think your just limiting your audience? I like them due to my anime and manga fandom, but I also understand that very few people have enough knowledge of the Japanese language to understand what is going on.

So, solution would be find or make a key of the suffixes you'll be using with the meaning of each and a pronunciation guide. I'd really like to see a pronunciation guide for names if you have the time for it; I get the feeling Jaek doesn't sound like Jake.

It's been about 4 months since I've read the other version, so I'm hazy on the differences, but I look forward to reading this story again (especially the new content that is sure to follow).

I'll have more to say in a few minutes, I forgot this forum's policy towards spam... besides, who the hell is that guy?