Okay, I guess the bio is as good as it gets, and it's alright considering he's your first character. Some of the magic is a bit too powerful though. It's not very realistic that he'd have so many skills in all the elements. Maybe you could just focus on a few elements which he's good at?

Also this might be nitpicking, but did Elves really have titanium? XD

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