Alright, overall the profile is okay. I just have a few issues with some parts of it. Firstly as concerns the strengths and weaknesses sections -- I'd like to know more about him as a person rather than his magical abilities. Remember that this isn't an RPG.

About his armour... you say that strong blows can dispel it. What does that mean, exactly?

As for the magical spells, I would like to know a lot more about how his abilities work, and how he uses them in more detail.

Lastly... I would really appreciate if you could add a bit more detail into the bio. Such as about his travels after being exiled. And about the man he met and why he had such an effect on him. Just bolster up the section.

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