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Originally Posted by サッボ
Not a haiku; you've got 8 syllable in the middle line (I-am-ma-le-how-can-I-lose)
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Male is a one-syllable word, not two >>;;
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Not a haiku; you've got 6 syllables in the first line (Sa-il-boat-is-no-judge)
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Sailboat is a two-syllable word, not three >>;;
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Not a haiku; 6 syllables in the first line again (I-know-my-hai-ku-skills)
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This is correct.