First of all, I'm
very glad that this comic isn't about four letters on a whirlwind adventure.
Secondly, I'm impressed. You have a lot of great things in this - art, plot, and humor. One thing I would suggest is to center the text inside of your speech bubbles (most evident in the second-to-last panel) and make the bubbles bigger so that there aren't collisions between them and the text. Other than that, it looks solid. Make more (especially since I want to know who the morons are)!