Woo Graphics Woo!
This is a good comic. I like the actiony swooshes. But- cheesy dialogue. I don't care about the spelling, that's not all that important, but the cheese is thick with curds in this dialogue. You said "I've only got 1 shot, so I'd better make this count" twice. Once would have been cheezy enough. The "Ha he's dead" (explosion cloud) "oh wait he's not there" reminded me of Dragon Ball Z. So did "Did you really think you could beat me?" (that line was okay)

Keep up the good graphics, and try to make your dialogue more beleivable.

I dubb thee - Medium
on the spicy scale of Goldstud.

With some work, you shalt become a Cajun or Chile!

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