Thread: Tree Haiku
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Old 07-06-2008, 09:38 PM
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Re: Tree Haiku

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Originally Posted by Layton View Post
thanks for the tissue,
And yeah, not eeryone can just, writ a haiku off the top of their head:

I am white
White I am,
Yes, I'm white

was that good?
You have to put time and thought into poetry.
Well, you didn't get the number of syllables right. And I guess I did put some thought into this one... it's just that my subconscious self is horrible at writing poetry. Yes, people, I wanted to see what would happen if I put a poem from a dream out on the Internet, aren't I horrible? XD Yeah, there was this singing tree, it was weird, but then my parents managed to convince me that they liked it.... Maybe I shoulda told you guys, but I didn't just in case your judgement was affected. Glad som people still liked it, though. I promise that I won't do anything like this again. Especially if it's because my parents were good liars.
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