Hey guys, I've decided to buckle down and get to writing again. This time though I'm not going to give a dip about some of your opinions (well the ones that just insult it) however if you decide that you must give advice please avoid being as blunt as you usually are. Simply explain the error you find in my writing and how I can improve, DO NOT give a four hour speech on how wrong my idea is or how stupid you think it is otherwise your post will be reported as spam. The material I'm posting in this thread is the intro to the story I'm adding to my stories section. Enjoy!



Avatar: The Last Air-bender, the double bender!

Author note: This story was my first plot I had for the Avatar section of my massive fan-fiction “Hiroshi’s daydream” But this version has nothing to do with that story. Although it does have to do with Hiroshi, and it starts in the world of Code Lyoco. Other than that it’s completely new. As far as my descriptions and writing style that's just my style, other than that enjoy!

Main Plot: When an aggravated young teen finds he still has his mutant powers he considers it to be a curse more than a blessing. Soon after he loses control after a long day at school he somehow finds himself in the alternate realm of earth. The world of Avatar: The last air-bender!

Characters you need to know.

The first and most important character you need to know is Hiroshi, around sixteen years old and former student of exaviors school for the gifted youngsters. Is a bratty sarcastic kid with a slight problem with superiors. Over the course of his adventure he matures quite a bit.

Katara: A seventeen year old girl from the southern water tribe (The Avatar world) she may be a bit motherly at times, but her great temper combined with her amazing water-bending skills makes her a great ally. But whatever you do do NOT get on her bad side!

Sokka: Katara’s younger brother, he is a cocky, sarcastic whiner that doesn’t like to work more than he thinks he should. But when push comes to shove he is an excellent warrior in battle. Although he often acts jealous of Katara’s bending he’d much rather swing his boomerang or his sword instead of water.

Toph: A feisty ten year old from the earth kingdom. This spunky blind earth-bender may be harsh, blunt, and annoying at times but she is one person you don’t want to fight. At least if you want to avoid being berried alive under a tone of rock!

Ang: A. K. A the avatar: This ten-year-old monk is the last air-bender and the leader of the team. Although he usually tries to find the fun in almost every activity he is an awesome fighter.

Well that does it for introductions for right now. I’ll introduce the other characters as we meet them.














Chapter One: Entre Hiroshi


“Man I can’t believe this! I warned that stubborn old principle that I could lose control at any time. And it was Sisi’s fault for throwing me into the pool in t he first place!” It’s been a rough day for Hiroshi today, not only has he just lost control of a power he thought was long gone but because of that he got suspended from school other than class and break hour as well.

“Hey! Where were you to day, I was supposed to tutor you this morning remember?” It’s Aileta, a fourteen year old girl at the school, her past is a mystery but she’s a kind giving young girl. She often thinks at a higher level in class, but otherwise she’s pretty normal.

“Ugh I got suspended remember? And thanks for snapping me out of it yesterday, God knows what would’ve happened to Sisi and the rest of the school if you didn’t jump in like that. I swear if there was a way to just erase these stupid powers of mine I would.” Hiroshi groaned sarcastically. What happened yesterday was just like Bruce Banner getting upset. Only he didn’t turn green and he used water instead of brute force to get revenge. If Aileta hadn’t calmed him down.....let’s say the pool area of the school wouldn’t be the only section of the school under re-construction right now.

Aileta turned her head sideways. “I thought that those kind of powers could be a good thing? Haven’t you been watching Arura on the news? She’s been doing some pretty incredible things, and helpful too.” Arura Monroe, also known as Storm from the x-men and Hiroshi’s former gym teacher. She taught him some ways to burn off some steem before he lost control but they don’t help much if there’s a large source of water nearby. Honestly he has practically no control over it, it just kicks in when his emotions get out of line. That explains my Bruce Banner example earlier.

“Yeah, and what about that power hungry Magneto? What if I end up losing it like he did, sorry but I’d rather not risk it. Look Aileta I know you’re trying to help but just get off about it! I’ll learn control when I’m good and ready for it.” Hiroshi snapped sharply back. He was still in a hectic mood after what happened yesterday. After Aileta left Hiroshi continued to storm off back to his cabin.

This's just the first chapter of the avatar section that I had origionally planned for hiroshi's daydream if you didn't read the author note.

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