Thanks Ivysaur, I really appreciate the comments. Thanks to you too NIkita!
Anyways, wrote another...


Saviour


Forming shadows out of dust
And relying on your grace.
Feel the hollowness
As it comes crashing down,
Above us in a suicidal memory.
But don’t worry, I will save you.

Fighting for that one last chance
To see you gleam,
To see you glitter.
Flowers of black and white
Resist nothing towards the eloquence,
Of a rather nothing feeling.

Fireflies brighten the sky
Of a moonless disturbance.
Once again, remember my words,
I will save you from death,
And relinquished thoughts
Shall never brake our barrier.

Forget our narrow escape
Into the exquisite droughts
of whereabouts and sinking grounds.
Render my soul into something new,
As I lose all consciousness and forget your face.
But remember, I will save you.

Stars falling, dreams calling , Angels dying.
Laughing is my way of saying;
“Screw Off”.
Hopefully, they’ll understand my composition
As I disappear into the acts of your mind.
Chances, hopes, who needs them,
When you have me?
But remember, I will save you.
Time elapses and I grow colder
Flowing in my blood stream is nothing
But forget memories
Of Despair.

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Thanks to Veritas for sig and avvy!
I kissed you at the apex of the maelstrom and asked if you would accompany me in a quick fall,
but you made me realize that my ticket wasn't good for two.
I rode alone.