OoC: Good post... @_@ But we're going to have to do what's called "Trimming the Fat", or removing superfluous or extra stuff from your writing. However, we'll start that with your next assignment.

BiC: The air cooled drastically as a red haired figure appeared, running his hands over his shirt and wiping away snow flakes onto the ground. The woman's eyes went wide as she looked at the young man that had emerged as he looked at her. "Yeah, yeah, yeah. I'll get to it in a second... just one thing!" he said, extending his hands to the side and looking up. The sun began to reflect off of the red haired boy as he stepped forwards, standing next to her as the sun faded and leaving a snow copy that quickly fell apart and scattered into the wind.

"Pretty cool, right?" Zachary asked as he looked at the woman, who simply nodded and then stepped back, startled. "Yeah, that's about what I did when I met my teacher too. I'm sure its less that you're scared than your shocked at what you're seeing. Or maybe its just that you didn't see me move because the snow was reflecting the sun. Yeah, pretty much all I did was freeze all of the water on my clothing, push it out so it formed a near identical image of myself, spread it so I could move past, and then brought it back together into a look-alike of me long enough to startle you," the ice innate stated as he started walking.

"T-teacher?" she asked, regaining her composure.

"Yeah, that's what I said. To save you and I time," the ice mage said as he walked on, "I'm going to give you the quick run through on what's going on. I am Zachary Leos. You are at the Dome. The Dome is an inter-dimensional place where warriors either quest for or come across in their journeys to be trained by the masters here. And, if you're wondering, my main power is ice magic. My expertise is in magical training, with a minor in a skill called Recreation. Although, this all means absolutely nothing since in about the next ten minutes, the Dome's going to tell me to send you somewhere, like into those ruins," he said, jerking his thumb at the ruins.

"So, you've got ten minutes to ask questions before you have to get going. Starting... now!"

OoC: Man I feel good. All of my characters are coming out very well of late. Anyway, new assignment:

Assignment Time:

Tierra will have a chance to ask Zachary a few questions. He'll answer any questions she has about the Dome, where they are at that moment, and anything else she's wondering... except about himself. He won't discuss his personal life, because he feels that is no one's business but his own. For that part, you have a maximum of 250 words, since its all dialogue. After that, Zach will tell her to head off into the ruins in search of a treasure chest you'll end the post finding. Word maximum of 500 words for that part. Keep in mind: avoid superfluous words, thoughts and phrases.

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Much thanks to Silver for the sweet Quincy Sig. ^_^
Zorlo , Zachary Leos, Monroe Vossler, Arvin Anson, Emile Velos
Rest In Peace Duke of Clubs. (11/15/1992-1/5/2008)
And Kenpachi divided the Strong from the Weak, and it was good!