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Originally Posted by William
You spent way to much time describing his clothes...
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Of course, he heard Nabooru ordered all of his servants to take the birth-control potions.
That was so lame it made me laugh.
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First of all, don't be a prick. Second, his clothes have a certain meaning and symbolism to the story. I'm sorry if you're too stupid to figure it out. Third, yeah birth-control potions. Maybe I could some up with a better phrase for that, but criticism should be done in a constructive and sensible manner. You're just being an ******* and maybe I would actually take you seriously if you were nicer about it.
EDIT: Okay, so I did change the birth-control potion thing. It kinda was lame, but still, be nice about these things, okay? I'll be more willing to listen.
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Originally Posted by rayburn
pretty cool story.
Ill definatley read on
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Thanks, I'm glad to know that at least some people have enjoyed it.