I find them a bit... boring. I liked your first one. Now I suppose they may be great. But personally I find them boring.

It all seems to come down to someone loving another person but at a distance. I get the impression that the person the dude loves is oblivious to it. Which I find to be more or less boring. Its not the first time the concept has been done. Hell look at the show Smallville. most of the show seemed to have Clark daydreaming about him and Lana. It got stale real fast.

I am not the proper person to give critique about songs and such, but I probably wouldnt be a fan. The whole depressing love concept is just boring.

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