Sorry that I did't include much critisisem,due to surcemstances it had to be a quik post.Now for critisisem,it all sounds great to me.On thing we might want to do is make sure that each person in at lest one town should have somthing to do with something,instade of like TP NPCs.



I also have a suggtestion for a character,you do'nt have to use him.

name=Zera the poisener

We never learn which side he's on,he does some good things and bad things.Link fights him as a boss but doesn't kill him,after Link beats him a hoard of enemys show up and Zera attacks them and tells Link to run but dies in the prosses.