My recommendations would be to tidy up your poetry. You have spelling mistakes ("suudenly"), punctuation mistakes (the fourth line of the first poem should be "It's"), and you didn't keep the first word capitilized of each line in the second poem (generally, all first words in each line are capitilized, or all of them are not (unless for another reason in specific cases, for example, a proper noun, or the start of a new sentence) in poetry). You have my apologies if that was intentional, but I don't recognize the intended effect caused, if so.

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