05-10-2008, 06:47 PM
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"Don't make me mad, I know where you live" my bud Shadow the hedgehog...
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Re: New story, finally done!
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Originally Posted by Tazryl
Actually I just noticed something. I suppose it might be my fault. When I said you need a new paragraph every time a new person talks it should be on a different line, preferably with an indent.
So instead of this.
You would have this.
Every time a new speaker speaks, it must be put into a new paragraph and indented. Pick up your favorite novel. This is how it should be. It makes it easier to read and understand.
I should have pointed this out earlier, but only just noticed this.
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Oh, you meant just endenting it. I thought you were talking about pressing enter and then indentig it like normal. So I'll remember these for next time. BTW what'd you think about the second chapter? Er I mean the material, not the writing. If you're still interested in reading it please do.
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