I guess "backstory..." does need to be re-written a tad. But there's no way I'm re-writing the whole thing twice. But I can change the little parts if need be.
Edit: This's what I did, the re-write practically answeres who the villan is right at the start. But it explains Midna showing up a little better, and I've also changed the situation with the guard and her reaction. So here you go, lemme know what you think! You might not make it all the way to shore this time ether, but you'd get a few miles in at least.
http://www.zeldauniverse.net/compone...ry,142/type,0/

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