Link101hyrule...
Mmm hmm hmm hmm! Delicious delectable story you've got going there!
Now It sounds like you've put a lot of thought into it, let's hope you continue this one!
If only my story was good enough to put up here, but it would not compare to yours..
I really love the description you come up with, like the dagger in chapter 2... Wow that's a really in depth description...
Man you are a very talented little writer aren't you? I envy, haha!
I can't wait for the later chapters, it seems you come up with all these complicated names for places, shouldn't be to hard for a character, hmm? Haha just kidding, I'm sure you want it perfect, at least I would.
You should introduce another character to join ______ on his journey, perhaps a thief girl? Would be cool, but it's your story!
Anywho, I hope you liked my 2 cents, I tried to make it sound as creepy and pedophile as possible haha!
Love it, need it, want more of it!
Could be crack. Addicting. Lush...
haha please ignore my rant, I'm in a weird mood at the moment.
I think I might start writing something, but we'll see... Ugh so complicated!
Wow long comment, can't wait for chapter 3, sweet dreams... ^^ (another creepy comment, bwuaha!)

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