That was very good. As a writer myself, I know conversation chapters are difficult to write, although for me it's completely different, seeing as how my conversation chapters are usually conversations about things like "Oh, by the way, did I mention you're the born hero destined to save the world?". But anyway, my point being I always think I've done a bad job of writing them, but when other people read them, they like them - and in the same way, I disagree with you when you say you suck at writing conversations. I think you're better than you think you are.

The whole piece was good. It was very emotional, fairly well written except for grammar (), and you've really brought the point across well. The end, in particular, I think is brilliant. The description of the river, and how easy it would be to end everything, really got me thinking, which, I imagine, is the idea. As I read that, I was imagining just what it would be like. It's actually quite shocking how *searching for right word* empathetic *?* that part of the text is.

Keep up the good work!