Hmm... well... it's good, I can give you that. However... there are a few problems I can see with it. First off, it's too blaring. It clashes with the song; just make the notes a bit more subtle. Second, it doesn't transition well enough; each note seems like a seperate sound, instead of a full, complete song.
Anyway, if you're going to improve it, I would love to see the progress, and I would like to see any more of your work, too!
