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Bumping off a few of those "said"s would do it a lot of good.
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yeh. some action would do it good, as well, or eliminating a couple of tags together.
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Originally Posted by Chibi
Moderation is the main point. And yes, using said all the time makes you cringe because it doesn't add attitude to the way people are talking. If everyone merely 'said' everything, it doesn't give them character and makes it sound like a monologue done by a poor drama student.
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mkay that's fine.
I'm done rabble-rousing now :3