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Originally Posted by Lly
I dunno about you- you might be more of a meticulous reader than I am, and you probably are since I'm kind of rubish at close-reading- but I seldom if ever notice dialogue tags, unless it's something particularly eyeroll-worthy like "boomed" or, as one of the sources stated, "ejaculated."
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See Selah's deliberately horrible example for the kind of thing I mean. Bumping off a few of those "said"s would do it a
lot of good. Anyways, just listen to the Chibi - she's the one running the joint here.
But...ejaculated? >.> That is a
horrible word to use.