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Old 05-07-2008, 07:37 PM
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Re: ZUser Created Challenge - Writing Round the Third~!!! (ZUCWR)

Ah - in this case I believe what should be done is not making EVERY dialogue end with 'said'. For everything. Consistently.

You should have a balance that mixes in a few other descriptive words so that it doesn't become boring. Not going overboard with it either. Make sense =s?
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