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Originally Posted by Adam_148
don't double post, either edit your first post or wait for someone to post first
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As far as I know its fine to doublepost in your own story/art threads.
As fot the story itself, its kinda... boring. The whole Knock Knock joke was sorta lame. Might want to try and find a better way to convey the idea that the Heroes Cloths are uncomfortablly hot for the time of year.
Just a thought. I think it has potential but still needs some work.