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Old 04-28-2008, 05:50 PM
Klaz Klaz is offline
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Re: A Brave New World

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Originally Posted by icehockeygoalie View Post
only thing i can complain about is that the main character should say "a lot" not "lots." that way it makes it more serious, little things like that make all the difference.
You know, reading that line I've noticed that he says lots people instead of lots of people, a typo. I'll put a fixed version later.

Last edited by Klaz; 05-02-2008 at 06:27 AM..
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