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Weight: 87 pounds
Height: 6' 5''
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O_o...That is really REALLY skinny! at 6'5 he should be at least 175.
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Weapon: A katana with an emblem of a phoenix. The weapon can be infused with holy magic and fire spells.
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How does the blade get infused, what can it do when it is infused, how does this affect the apperence of the blade?
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Strengths: Sephenis is good at fighting with his katana Phoenix's Beak. Hes a master at magic fighting. With the combine strength of swords fighting and magic infused sword, hes a Knight of honor.
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*Ahem* it is He's, not Hes, please fix that for the sack of my eyes. =P
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Weakness: Sephenis is weak against any dark magical spell or any fire based melee attack. If hit by dark magic, he becomes blind for several minutes and if shoot by fire, he becomes weak.
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Not all People use mafic, I am going to need at the very least one more weakness that can be explotied, maybe two.
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Skills/Magic: Freedom's Wing: A white wing grows on Sephenis left side of hes back. With this wing, he can heal each 36 seconds.
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His back, not hes back. What do you mean 'heal each 36 seconds," that doesn't make any sense.
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Tyranny's Wing: A black wing grows on Sephenis right side of the back. With this wing, he can reflect any magical attack coming toward him.
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Any? Put a limit on this because it is way to strong.
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Angel Summon: Calls fort an angel to use Esuna and Cura.
Demon Summon: calls fort a demon to use Fira, Blizzara and Thundara.
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Forth, not Fort, a Fort is something completely different. Also this isin't Final Fantasy, please explain each of these spells, and exlain the angel/demon, it might just be a little too powerful either way but that remains to be seen.
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Appearance: Black and white coat, a necklace with an angel in it, a white shirt, black armor parts and white skin with long black pants and black shoes.
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Personality: Sephenis isn't the kind of person that likes to talk much. He's much like of a person that doesn't like to befriend with anyone except heartless people. Sephenis was born with a single bad side. Hes brother was the only one who accepted him in any way.
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That is all for now, fix those things and I will get back to you =]