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Originally Posted by Sonic Boom This may have been in an earlier chapter, but do you think it's safe to be writing about intecourse. You never know when some young kid is going to read this, and the might wonder about it, and ask their parents about it before they are ready. |
In a world like this, it makes little difference...
But seriously, it
is a teen story. And I'm trying to keep it toned down a bit (which can get very hard, very fast), while still, at the least, alluding to it, so people know what's going on.
In my own opinion--and I know there are people who disagree--I think that it's okay for children to
know about it. As long as we're not instructing them on how to do it, or something like that, it's okay.
So, in answer...yes, I do. As you'll read later on, Eleah despises premarital sex (as do I). I'd think that makes some compensation. The big expert on love,
against that.
Lol, if TFG hadn't been rated T, I might've made this one M. But some kids follow those restrictions, and thus it'd be cruel to them for this one to be a higher level of maturity. If I wasn't restricted, I'd be making this a whole lot more realistic: more offensive "swears" and the like.
And notice: in the story, I completely refrain from calling it "sex". I just sorta skip around that.
Edit: If you really want, you can PM me to continue discussing this, as long as you don't post it in here. Or talk to me in person. Whichever suits you.