Can you organize this a bit?
Is this even gameplay or story?
If this is story... then... Could you explain the story in abstract instead of specifics?

I don't know where storys go honestly... but I've been told fan fiction... so...
If you want to make a decent Future Zelda Game, tell us your abstract. If you want to make a story, other places will help you with that and criticize correctly...

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