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Originally Posted by Rhalen
Hello, nice fan fic. I hate it. Goodbye.
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Some constructive criticism could be nice. Animals are a key element, but importance is placed on trust. The final boss is an NPC and the second part of the game revolves around finding out who that character is. To do this you must is "The Book of Truth" an omnescent tome that is written in an ancient launguage which can be decoded by finding six peices of a Rosetta stone like-object known as the Piedraverdad. I know the beginning may sound a bit dull but it will get better. Also as Avalon is a realm connected to all worlds a variety of races will be present form, terminian Deku, to desert dwelling Rito (they evolved similarly to Dragon Roost Rito but are not from the Great sea), and an previously unseen world where sencient Dodongo live.