... welll, um... It needs a tittle for the chapter xD heh, that's just me trying to find something bad to start with (I always start with the bad things). I cant really find anything bad about this chapter. It's so funny! This looks like it's going to be a really good parody (who knows, maybe someday you'll make Grass fear you xD). This chapter/prologue/whatever the hell you wanna call it was great. One thing I must say though...
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Random Voice: And that’s how it went on, since he didn’t beat Gannon fairly nobody loved link… not even Elmo. Anyway, centuries went by and a new Link was born, but he was also shunned, because he was a descendent of the old cheater. And so this continued for 10 generations… Then, when people found out that half of the Gerudo population were illegally imported Mexicans everyone lost interest in the Link descendents and moved on. More years passed… and the evil returned…
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I'm Mexican, my whole family is Mexican and I really dont find this racist or offensive or anything, but their are some part of la raza who are just waaaaaaaay too sensitive, so try to keep those jokes to a minimum (though they ARE funny)
I'll give it a 4/5. This parody looks great so far, DONT SCREW UP! xD (my way of saying good luck)
One final thing: when you said "my turn at a parody" does that mean this is your first parody?