Oh my god... We're trying to help you! We're offering suggestions on how you can improve this parody! However, it seems that you're one of those authors that believes that they are above criticism.

No one is above criticism. It's only bad authors who believe that. Ask any good author, and they will tell you that they learn from criticism.

Now, I am going to offer some constructive criticism yet again. I hope you take this into account instead of throwing a fit again.

The problem with having a REALLY short parody is that there isn't enough space for jokes, and it gives the whole thing a rushed feeling. Look at all the good parodies on ZU. They are not REALLY short. If you want this parody to get better, you probably shouldn't make it REALLY short.

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Originally Posted by Ranil, after being defeated in Brawl by the power of taunts Oh shut the **** up. You're being so immature right now. I have every right to leave if I'm being annoyed by someone's stupid taunts.